The pie charts illustrates the number of sales in different spheres of online shopping in New Zealand during 10 years.
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pie graphs
depicts the number of sales in four spheres, which are travel,film,books and clothes in New Zealand from 2003 to 2013 .It is clear from Change the determiner
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the graph
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travel in 2003 and in films/music in 2013.
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what is shown, in 2003 the biggest percentage is 36% in travel,after that clothes which is 24% .The lowest figure was on
books 19%.
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