Your Australian friend is thinking about making a short visit to your country, and intends to visit a particular tourist attraction during his/her stay. However, you feel that it would be better for your friend to visit a different tourist attraction. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter recommend a good time for your friend to visit your country say why it would be better to visit a different tourist attraction suggest that you and your friend meet

#australian #friend #visit #country #tourist #attraction #time

Dear Rahul, How have you been doing recently? I got your letter mentioning you are coming to India

this

summer and I am really excited about your

this

visit.

Although

I can't wait to see you as we haven't met for 2 years, I rather suggest you come visit India in winter

instead

. As the summers here are really harsh and intolerable as compared to Australia;

moreover

, there will be higher chances of you falling sick. In comparison, winters here are far more pleasant and are considered the best time of the year to do tourism around the country. By the way, you mentioned that it's a short trip and you will be only visiting major cities Delhi and Agra. Believe me, if that's the case you will be really missing a lot. I

also

want you to see the rural beauty of India as it will

also

help you in your final project on Geography. why not come first to visit me in Punjab and from there you can begin your

further

trip. I would love to come

along with

you

while

visiting village areas. looking forward to meeting you soon. Best wishes, Gurpreet

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

195 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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