The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, we cannot
smoke
in certain areas because of the law and some people
think that using a mobile phone
must ban like smoke
. In this
essay, I will elaborate on my opinion on why I strongly disagree about this
topic.
To begin
with, in our modern society, the mobile phone
is a very important thing and also
many people
smoke
too. But, smoking is many research show that is
very bad for our health. When we smoke
on the street, there is cigarette smoke
generated and affect other people
. Cigarette smoke
contains many bad substitutes. For example
, tar, nicotine and carcinogen
can easily be addicted to smoke
. On the other hand
, the mobile phone
does not contain bad substitute things
. But, it is also
have addicted easily. For instance
, there are many apps on mobile phones these days, like Instagram, Facebook and Tictok and some people
watched these apps all day and these things
lead to mental problems.
However
, a mobile phone
is not damaged by other people
if you are walking on the street and present day we can use mobile phone
do to many things
such
as reserve flight ticket or train and some counties can use it when taking a bus to pay. Moreover
, we can communicate even far from home. These things
that we do not worry about addiction and are very comfortable in our life.
In conclusion, I completely disagree that smoking is clearly not good for our health but mobile phones are not. So, we must control the place that allows the smoke
but a mobile phone
is very useful in our lives and don't have to worry about our health so, that's why I disagree mobile phone
should be banned like smoking.Submitted by livewire53 on
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