The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, we cannot
smoke
in certain areas because of the law and some
people
think that using a mobile
phone
must ban like
smoke
. In
this
essay, I will elaborate on my opinion on why I strongly disagree about
this
topic.  
To begin
with, in our modern society, the mobile
phone
is a very important thing and
also
many
people
smoke
too. But, smoking is many research show
that is
very bad for our health. When we
smoke
on the street, there is cigarette
smoke
generated and affect other
people
. Cigarette
smoke
contains many bad substitutes.
For example
, tar, nicotine and carcinogen   can easily be addicted to
smoke
.
On the other hand
, the mobile
phone
does not contain bad substitute
things
. But, it is
also
have addicted easily.
For instance
, there are many apps on mobile phones these days, like Instagram, Facebook and Tictok and some
people
watched these apps all day and these
things
lead to mental problems.  
However
, a mobile
phone
is not damaged by other
people
if you are walking on the street and present day we can use mobile
phone
do to many
things
such
as reserve flight ticket or train and some counties can use it when taking a bus to pay.
Moreover
, we can communicate even far from home. These
things
that we do not worry about addiction and are very comfortable in our life.   In conclusion, I completely disagree that smoking is clearly not good for our health but mobile phones are not. So, we must control the place that allows the
smoke
but a mobile
phone
is very useful in our lives and don't have to worry about our health so, that's why I disagree mobile
phone
should be banned like smoking.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • antisocial
  • social interactions
  • negative impacts
  • banning
  • regulated
  • completely banned
  • education
  • awareness campaigns
  • responsible
  • mobile phone use
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