Parents should take courses in parenting in order to improve the lives of their children. To what extend do you agree.
As
the
technology grows Correct article usage
apply
people
across the globle
suspects Correct your spelling
globe
global
to upgrade
themselves in parenting to encourage their Change the verb form
upgrading
child
in
the correct path. Whether every Change preposition
on
parent
should take this
as a mandatory skill or they can guideline
with Replace the word
guide
own
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their own
life
experience is a never ending
debate. Can anyone deny that in older days without any parenting Add a hyphen
never-ending
course
parent
's brought up their children
and shaped their lifestyles? Certainly not.
In the modern world, the cost of education is in lakhs even for pre-school child
in international schools even Fix the agreement mistake
children
then
they suggest parent
to
take courses like parenting to improve Remove the particle
apply
child's
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a child's
life
. Will this
course
really teaches a useful information
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useful information
a piece of useful information
how
the Change preposition
about how
oldage
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old age
people
guide ? Obviously no. To illustrate, to connect childern
to the latest trend, public speakers or socially influenced Correct your spelling
children
person
are suggesting individuals to grab attention in parenting Fix the agreement mistake
people
course
. Fix the agreement mistake
courses
In addition
, office goers does
not spend time with their Change the verb form
do
child
so children
will be mentally affected for
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by
kind
of care and love. In that case, parents should learn parenting to interact with Correct article usage
the kind
children
during their free time.
In the early centuries, without much communications
parents are Fix the agreement mistake
communication
invloved
in shaping their Correct your spelling
involved
child
in the organic food style. Even famous Fix the agreement mistake
children
people
like Alexander Graham Bell who invented telephone
, Change the article
the telephone
Charles
Babbage who invented Correct word choice
and Charles
computer
did they Correct article usage
the computer
originated
because of their parenting? Indeed no. Wrong verb form
originate
For instance
, maintaining a peaceful life
and encouraging thier
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their
child
's own interest was the only reason for many investors to come out. Moreover
, Parent
stay
as a backbone in the failures so Change the verb form
stays
children
reaches
greater height.
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reach
To conclude
, the course
for parenting is not required if you have life
exposure and how to handle the situation.Thus
I strongly believe Add an article
a parent
parent
should focus on their ancient culture to grow in Fix the agreement mistake
parents
the
healthier way as in those centuries Correct article usage
a
people
led a successful life
compartively
with Correct your spelling
comparatively
required
lifestyle.Correct article usage
the required
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