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The diagram details the process of making leather products.

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The provided chart is a depiction of a step-by-step method of producing leather goods. At a brief analysis of the diagram, the entire process of production takes eight essential stages.
To begin
 with, flayed animal skins are dried before being delivered to a factory by a lorry. Following that, the raw material is
then
 washed in a solution of water and lime. Once washed, it is left to be soaked in a vat of lime before being run through a flattening machine.
Next,
the flattened tannin is kept in a vessel full of water and vegetable matter concoction.
Finally
, the product is polished before being deployed to an industrial building, where it is made into various items.
To conclude
, manufacturing these products is fairly
straight-forward
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