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The table above shows data on the demographics of four nations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table above shows data on the demographics of four nations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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Information
 about the population,
GDP
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 per
capita
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 in US dollars and average life expectancy of four countries is presented
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 a table.
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, there are great differences in the data for all four nations. China leads by population with its stunning over 1,300,000,000 citizens,
on the contrary
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 with less than $7,000
GDP
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 per
Capita
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 the
contry
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country
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last
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 category, the life expectancy is around 75 years slightly higher than Russia's, which has a tenth of the previous-mentioned's people but more than double China's
GDP
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Capita
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. USA has over 300,000,000 people and is the leader in the
economical
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 area with over $50,000
GDP
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 per
Capita
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 almost ten-thousand more than the
folling
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following
 UK, which
while
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 having less than 65,000,000 population, is the only one, whose people live on average above the age of 80,
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contrast
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 the US is the only one with a number below seventy in
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 statistic.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words gdp, capita with synonyms.
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