The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
The given line graph describes the changes
of
Change preposition
in
fish
and some different Use synonyms
kind
of meat in a European country over a period of 25 years from 1979 to 2004
As can be Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
cleanly
seen from the graph the number of Correct your spelling
clearly
fish
was lower than some different Use synonyms
kind
of meat Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
while
lamb and beef Linking Words
decline
chicken had experienced a fluctuating rise.
In terms of Wrong verb form
declined
fish
, between 1979 and 2004, the export of Use synonyms
fish
rapidly fall from 60 to 40 grams
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Likewise
, lamb consumption sharply drop from 150 to 70 grams between 1979 to 2004
At the outset, in 1979 beef accounted Linking Words
Change preposition
for the
the
large share of meat consumption. And Correct article usage
a
then
, during the Linking Words
periods
from 1984 to 2004, there was a significant drop from 120 to 100 grams.
Fix the agreement mistake
period
Finally
, in sharp contrast chicken consumption over a period of 25 years starting from 1979 to 2004, there was a Linking Words
decrease
from 140 to 250 yearsWrong verb form
decreased
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