The supplied bar chart above represents the data about people living in rural, urban and town who born in Australia or outside of state between 1995 and 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion where Australian individuals lived grouped by their birth location between 1995 and 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that peoples tend to relocate their accommodations to city areas after 1995.
1995 experienced the majority of people whether their birthplace in Australia or not tend to live in the cities. Followed by the rural areas, which was the second highest about 30% for those who were born in this
country and 40% for the another one. Meanwhile, only a few of them preferred to stay in town.
Turning to another figure, 2010 saw a significant increase in the percentage of living in cities in both categories, with those born in Australia at approximately 65% and who not
at 80%. The remaining location even combined just lower than 40% in both figures.Add a missing verb
were not
Submitted by jirawat.sea on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
▼