The following two pia charts show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in1985 and in 1995.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of different
freetime
Correct your spelling
free time
free-time
activities
by European teenagers in two different years, 1985 and 1995.
It is clear that
all leisure
activities
by adults decreased in both years, while
a
new Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
leisure
activities
found
as Add a missing verb
were found
palying
computer games in 1995.
The most popular Correct your spelling
playing
leisure
activities
among adults was watching tv, about Fix the agreement mistake
activity
roughply
30% in both years. By Correct your spelling
roughly
contrats
, Correct your spelling
contrast
palying
computer games became the new favorite Correct your spelling
playing
activities
in 1995, which was 27% in 1995.
The sum of talking with family and Fix the agreement mistake
activity
firends
Correct your spelling
friends
were
39% of Correct subject-verb agreement
was
leisure
activitives
of teenagers in 1985, decreasing to 31% in 1995. The percentage of eating out of adults was almost 23% in 1985,
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activities
whereas
declined less
than 10% in 1995. Change preposition
by less
Finally
, other activities
of
European fell on averageChange preposition
in
3
% in 1995.Change preposition
by 3
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