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Some people say that the clothes people wear are the most important indication of what they are like. Others, however, say that people should not be judged by the clothes they wear. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #clothes #indication
Currently, the way
people
dress
 in
this
life
 has an extended discussion. Some
community
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 argue that clothing is a very crucial thing to show their personality;
however
,
others
 assert that fashion is not the one thing to determine society’s appearance.
This
 essay would elaborate on those views and my own opinion in the following paragraph. To the proponents of clothing, how
people
dress
 well would show their good attitude. By wearing a suitable
dress
, society would show their good character, give honour to some special occasion, and always look perfect in every moment.
For instance
, when
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have
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 to attend a meeting at a famous company, they prefer to wear a suit and loafers in order to look formal in the situation.
People
 would look
as
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an
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elegant
member
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 of the circumstance.
Hence
, wearing good clothes would support
people
’s outlook.
On the other hand
, other
people
 believe that personality could not be valued just only by wearing clothing, but it can be measured by how they respect each other in
this
life
.
People
 who wear
a
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simple
costume
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 could help the poor, do charity, and
also
 could motivate each other.
For example
, a young man who wears a simple outfit could help the elderly who do not have a family by treating them with food when they are hungry.
Thus
,
dress
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 is not
the
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one that could be used to measure another’s personality. Personally, considering both views, I strongly believe that dressing well in some situations and treating
others
 well could be equivalently important things in community
life
.
People
 who could wear a good
dress
 regarding the occasion, and still have good behaviour in treating
others
 with the simple
dress
 would make them a good value as
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member of society
life
.
Therefore
, both aspects should be equivalent in their
life
. In conclusion,
while
 some
people
 argue that clothing is the most crucial stuff to show their performance;
however
,
others
 think that having
a
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good respect for
others
 even though they wear a simple
dress
 is
also
 important. From my point of view, I totally believe that dressing well on some occasions and giving good treatment to
others
 would need a great balance in
this
life
.
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