The graph shows the annual income of languages-related jobs in US dollars in five cities.

The graph shows the annual income of languages-related jobs in US dollars in five cities.
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The bar chart illustrates how much
doctors
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and other occupations gain income
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each year within five different nations.
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, it can be seen that in the US whether
doctors
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or not can provide a higher salary when compared with other countries. The US experienced a significant gap between the money that was paid to
doctors
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among other countries, with almost 125$. Followed by Switzerland and France with the same value
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about 70$. With
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of Finlant,
doctors
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in the remaining countries
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received
approximately 60$. Meanwhile, the income for other workers
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lower when compared with
doctors
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. Even in the
US
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they can
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just only 45$, which is the highest salary. The second and third highest
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are Switzerland 35$ and France 30$ and the other just lower than 25$.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words doctors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual income
  • language-related professions
  • urban areas
  • disparity
  • income levels
  • compensation
  • financial incentives
  • demand
  • cost of living
  • industry presence
  • career prospects
  • job markets
  • economic incentives
  • language education
  • tourism industry
  • education sector
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