The graph shows the annual income of languages-related jobs in US dollars in five cities.
The bar chart illustrates how much
doctors
and other occupations gain income in
each year within five different nations. Change preposition
apply
Overall
, it can be seen that in the US whether doctors
or not can provide a higher salary when compared with other countries.
The US experienced a significant gap between the money that was paid to doctors
among other countries, with almost 125$. Followed by Switzerland and France with the same value as
about 70$. With Change preposition
of
exception
of Finlant, Correct article usage
the exception
doctors
in the remaining countries recived
approximately 60$.
Meanwhile, the income for other workers Correct your spelling
received
are
lower when compared with Change the verb form
is
doctors
. Even in the US
they can Add a comma
,US
grained
just only 45$, which is the highest salary. The second and third highest Change the verb form
grain
price
are Switzerland 35$ and France 30$ and the other just lower than 25$.Change the noun form
prices
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