Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some
people
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believe that the only reason for learning foreign languages is to travel abroad or to work abroad in the country they need to learn their
language
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as communication with native
speakers
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and learning from them will
much
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easier,
while
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others think that it is not the only way because in modern days the world has changed. In my point of view, there are other reasons to learn a third or a
second
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and
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apply

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language
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. Many
people
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who believe that learning
foreign
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a foreign

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language
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depends on to be staying
on
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in

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the
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a

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foreign country
supporting
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support

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their
believe
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belief

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by
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with

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the idea of
face to face
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face-to-face

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communication with native
speakers
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.
Therefore
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, they can use the
language
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in their daily life. They think that by practising it all
the
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day
of
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in

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the shops, work, and
resturants
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restaurants

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they will adopt the
language
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. To explain, research papers proved that to
occure
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occur

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a new skill a person
need
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needs

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to practice it
45minutes
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for 45minutes

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per day for
month
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a month

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so the opportunity of
practicing
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practising

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forgien
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foreign

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languages in
the
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apply

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forgien
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foreign

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countries is more welcomed and much easier. In
contract
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contrast

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, other
people
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think that learning a
second
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language
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doesn't need to stay out of the
learner
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learner's

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country. They feel that in
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the

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21st century
the
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apply

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learning has become easier.
For instance
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, increment made learning a
second
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language
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less
complecated
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complicated

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IElts studying learn
English
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the English

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language
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from it by using
pod cast
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podcast

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from the native
speakers
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.
In addition
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, they can
us
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use

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apps like Cambly to practice speaking with native
speakers
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.
Therefore
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, learning a
second
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language
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has become much by the internet. In
contract
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contrast

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, some
people
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believe that the primary reason for adopting a
second
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language
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is to stay
a broad
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abroad

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because
the
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of the

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availability of native
speakers
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,
while
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other human beings
seeing
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see

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it
is
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as

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a traditional way as
internet
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the internet

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has changed our world .In my opinion, travelling abroad
not
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is not

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the only reason to learn a foreign
language
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