Some people believe that to be successful in a sport, natural ability is necessary, while others think hard work and practice is more import. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It has been a fierce argument that natural capability determines one’s accomplishment in

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athletics

or hard endeavour and practice play a key role in the achievement of a

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player. It is true that natural talent and continued effort are both vital elements to assist sports athletes to succeed.

However

, I personally believe that hard work and practice play a more critical role in

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success in

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. It is understandable that some individuals agree that natural talent is a key element in deciding one’s achievement in

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because there are a couple of reasons to support their view of point.

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normally a

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player was identified by professionals when the person was

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a younger age and just started the

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without much coaching and practising on it.

Second,

the natural ability of

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could trigger

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interest in

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athletics

as the personnel could recognise

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as an area which he/she potents. Even though we could not deny the importance of innate capability acts an excelled position on identifying high-potential

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players, I strongly believe that all

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successful

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players contribute a continuous effort to practising and learning.

First,

no

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player in the world was born with the ability to be skilful on any

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field before having appropriate coaching and guidance from professional trainers.

Second,

there is

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a number of human beings in the world having talents in the same

game

and the one thing that distinguishes their achievements in the end is how hard

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individuals

work on the activities. Many real examples prove hard work and practice make a great athlete. Coby Byran and James Byran are persuasive examples in NBA history, which presents the secret of their success in basketball as diligence. Messi was

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a convincing case to demonstrate dedicated efforts to make a person succeed in a

game

. To summarise,

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can start interested in a

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if they have inborn skills in some sports.

While

diligence and continuous

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determine athletes’ success in their careers.