Some people think cities are the best to live. Others prefer to live in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals believe that the best place to live is the

city

while

others give an opinion that the

countryside

would be a better place to settle down. Despite both places

have

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having

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their prospects with many

of

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apply

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technological enchantment and high job opportunity for

cities

,

peaceful

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a peaceful

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atmosphere and

vast

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a vast

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sky

contain

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containing

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fresh air for the

countryside

,

this

writer still consider

cities

would give

people

a

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apply

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better

life

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living

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condition. It can be easily noticed that

cities

are the

center

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centre

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of technology with a variety of

newest

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the newest

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inventions and development

support

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supporting

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citizens. These are creations that would reduce stress and work

give

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and give

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people

more time to do what they wanted.

Cities

are

also

known for the number of companies and factories,

this

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which

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offer

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offers

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a lot of jobs for the

local

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locals

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which is the

city

. Jobs may include management positions which are well-paid jobs so

cities

attracted many

people

. Regarding

to

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the Vietnamese income investigation in 2023,

people

who lived in the

city

have their income higher than other places 47%.

Beside

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cites

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cities

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, the

countryside

has its benefits. Opposite to the crowded atmosphere in

cities

, rural areas are peaceful and

less

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have less

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pollution than that in

cities

. The

countryside

is not developed as the

city

so it does not have

much

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many

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factories

make

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making

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the air there

are

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apply

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very fresh and

for

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apply

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its traditional style

make

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makes

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life’s

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life

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flow slower and

reduce

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reduces

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stress. There

is

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are

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large crop fields and animals with vast sky able the

countryside

to leave a relaxing experience for those

have

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who have

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been there. In conclusion, both

cities

and

countryside

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the countryside

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are potential

choice

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choices

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to live

and

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in and

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they have their way to fulfill

people

, even though

cities

seem to be a

more

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apply

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superior decision.