In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, it starting to be more and more popular when
children
searching or engaging for the
job in Correct article usage
a
the
early years.
On the one hand, it is a big problem when Change the word
their
children
waste their childhood in part-time jobs. Kids have not get
any experience, Change the verb form
got
that
is why most of them Correct pronoun usage
which
work
in social jobs such
as waiter
. Fix the agreement mistake
waiters
For instance
, in Kazakhstan one day on
Change preposition
of
work
can take 16 hours, reason
for that, Add an article
the reason
it
is easy for the employee to replace you Add a missing verb
is it
by
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with
other worker
, cause Change the wording
another worker
other workers
of
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apply
the
most Correct article usage
apply
of
jobs where Change preposition
apply
children
work
, do not need a lot of skills and experiences
, so most of the employers use that and giving you too much Fix the agreement mistake
experience
work
hours.
On the other hand
, working in a free time for most children
have more plusses than minuses. Most of
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apply
the
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apply
children
do not know how to use given time in a
right Correct article usage
the
way
, so for
parents are better to Change preposition
apply
engaged
their Change the verb
engage
child
in Fix the agreement mistake
children
summer
Correct article usage
the summer
holidays
Fix the agreement mistake
holiday
to
Fix the infinitive
apply
work
. By experiencing the way
of claiming money by yourself
, most, Correct pronoun usage
themselves
Change preposition
of their
their
Correct pronoun usage
apply
children
start to spend their money only for
needed and wished things. There are a great deal of examples when Change preposition
on
children
from rich family
, changed their Fix the agreement mistake
families
way
of thinking to not only for money, but also
for workers.
In conclusion, there a
bunch of positive and negative affect from working in your childhood, but it is Add a missing verb
are a
Correct article usage
an unchangable
unchangable
experience that you will use for all your life. It is a Correct your spelling
unchangeable
choose
of all people did they need Replace the word
choice
this
experience or they
Add a missing verb
do they
prefer
spend their childhood in the other Add the particle
toprefer
way
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