Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations of to look after their citizens themselves?

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Nowadays, we are seeing two groups  of communities in the world; weak
people
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and rich
people
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. In every
country
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, there are many
people
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who help other
people
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by preparing food and conditions to go to school and university.
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society
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pays attention to poorer human beings. In my opinion, the
government
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must have a plan to create balance in
society
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, among the poor and rich communities and tend to poor
people
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. On the one hand, the presidents or prime ministers in every
country
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have to care about their citizens. whether poor  or wealthy . They must try to provide excellent conditions to develop a rich
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that is
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rolling in
money
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, so all citizens will have a better life and wealth will contribute in equal quantities between them,
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, the
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won't have poorer nations. For ,example a nation
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full of natural resources; like oil, fossil fuel, etc, will be able to export them to other
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and earn
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for its
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, or the
countries
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which are good at industry, trade and tourism industry,
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they will be capable of sending their commodities in other
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and attract tourists in their
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.
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, the
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that struggles to have a good economy is more successful than other Communities;
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, it satisfies their individuals and
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gives them glee and satisfaction in their lives.
On the other hand
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, the
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must protect  their nations, especially, poorer individuals.
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, They must consider a goal to distribute all facilities in all of the
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and construct Hospitals, Schools, Shops, Banks, Restaurants and so on, in poor areas with appropriate expenditures
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,  most goods have good and low expenses that poor and weak
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can afford their necessary requirements,
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they undergo free education to acquire new skills which can work.
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, they will be able to proper many staff recruitments and job opportunities for
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who are in difficulties; these cause  crime rates to decrease and make a safe
society
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. In conclusion, the
government
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has an efficient role in assisting nations and they are responsible that taking care of poor
people
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. They must produce goods which will earn
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and rich for them to divide between their citizens and make fair in the nation
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, They will be able to provide job opportunities to make
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for their nation's lives.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • interconnected
  • global stability
  • economic self-sufficiency
  • sustainable development
  • capacity-building
  • foreign aid
  • mutual benefits
  • trade relations
  • long-term outcomes
  • dependency
  • moral obligation
  • alleviate poverty
  • humanitarian assistance
  • resource allocation
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