The graph below shows that the percentage of Australian export to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
The supplied line chart illustrates in percentage the number of Australian exports to four different countries in ten years period from 1990 to 2012.
Overall
, the graph shows fluctuations in four regions, with China
showing a sharp rise over the years compared to other countries.
Firstly
, from 1990 to 1995 there is a deep downtrend between Japan and US. Whereas
, Japan dropped sharply from around 26% to just about below 20%, followed by the US from above 10% went down to more or less 8%. Moreover
, during the same period, China
went up slightly, while
India remained constant.
According to
the data, from 2000 to 2012, China
and India showed a similar uptrend. Whereas
, India gradually climbed up from around 1% and peaked in 2010 at just above 7% but dropped considerably to approximately under 10% by 2012. Moreover
, there was a significantly increased in the export to China
, from around 2% and reaching its peak at the end
of the period to approximately almost 30%.Submitted by freetoscream on
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