The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the number of
visitors
to various Caribbean islands between 2012 and 2017. Overall
, the information shows both island visitors
and cruise
ship visitors
, as well as
a combination of both types of visitors
. Overall
, the three lines do reach the maximum for each category, despite some fluctuations.
First,
despite the fact that both data indicated an increase in the overall
number, a clear increase can be seen from 2010 to 2011. As a result
, data increased by roughly half for visitors
who stayed on cruise
ships as opposed to those who stayed on the island. Additionally
, between 2012 and 2015, there were 1.2% fewer visitors
staying on land than there were on cruise
ships.
The graph shows that around the year 2016, the three charts all showed an almost significant increase, while
the total number of visitors
who stayed on islands or cruise
ships increased by more than 3% in comparison to each visitor who stayed, whether on an island or a ship.Submitted by freetoscream on
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