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Whereas the given diagram displays the main causes of agricultural land degradation, the table represents data about impact of the aforementioned reasons to North America, Europe and Oceanida in 1990s.

Whereas the given diagram displays the main causes of agricultural land degradation, the table represents data about impact of the aforementioned reasons to North America, Europe and Oceanida in 1990s.
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Whereas
 the given diagram displays the main causes of agricultural
land
 degradation, the
table
 represents data about
impact
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the impact
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 of the aforementioned reasons
to
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 North America,
Europe
 and
Oceanida
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Oceania
 in
1990s
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. Generally speaking,
in
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 the worldwide level three main reasons can be called owning the maximum percentages among other causes.
In addition
, the
table
 shows that
to
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Europe
 belongs the greatest magnitude of
the
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degraded
land
 and
in contrast
 in North America was indicated the minimum per
cent
 of
land
 becoming worse. Upon initial observation, it becomes evident that the first and main reason
of
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 the
land
 problem is over-gazing, precisely, it is equal to 35 per
cent
.
Furthermore
,
according to
 the
table
, in
deforestation
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 field
Europe
 was in
the
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first place in the list of percentages. Compared to it, in 1990 North America
has
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indicated the lowest number in the same field and it was
for
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9.6
percent
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 less than in
Europe
. A close examination of the
table
 revealed that in
Oceanida
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Oceania
 the
land
 is mostly degraded owing to
the
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over-gazing
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over-grazing
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, displaying
the
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11.3 per
cent
 which was the largest indicator in comparison with other regions respectively. Interesting to notice that the per
cent
 of over-cultivation was equal to zero in the same country,
Oceanida
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Oceania
.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words land, table, europe, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "data" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "indicated" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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