Entertainment such as electronic games on portal devices is harmful for individuals and the society they live in. Do you agree or disagree?

It's widely believed that new technology has entirely changed the way of entertainment and that causes an adverse effect on the new generation,
while
some people accept it positively. I partially agree with the statement, And In
this
essay, I will try to explain both views to a certain extent.
Firstly
, in
this
advanced technology era, youngsters are inclined towards
video
games
which
consequently
causes some negative impact on their careers and health.
For instance
, students are less focused on their studies
due to
computer/mobile
games
which lead to failure in their academic education.
Moreover
, youth who are deeply indulged in playing
games
are less likely to have proper diets
as a result
they could face serious health issues
such
as obesity.
In addition
,
video
games
consume a lot of valuable time which is
also
a considerable drawback.
Secondly
, Nowadays young people and kids are adopting
video
games
as their careers as well.
For example
, popular YouTubers are earning fortune and opulence by just playing
games
online. If one has an interest in spending hours playing
games
online he/she can host a live stream and shoot
video
of themselves during the paying session which earns a huge amount of money and
this
is a positive side of electronic
games
.
Therefore
, online
games
can become the main earning source as well. In conclusion, the popularity of electronic
games
is increasing dramatically
due to
entertainment
as well as
wealth.
According to
me, becoming a gamer is a good career option;
however
, parents' supervision requires to a great extent whether children are serious towards it or not.
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