Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.

There is no doubt that nowadays our

environment

need

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to be improved. The question is do

individuals

made a change to their

environment

? In

this

essay

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I am going to discuss my view and draw my personal conclusion. In terms of disadvantages,

individuals

depending

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only on

government

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and large

companies

to make the

environment

be

more

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better. The main reason given to support

this

claim is that we see huge improvements from

government

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every year but

individuals

are only setting without any help from them. To illustrate,

government

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has successfully linked

a

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water to the

inhabitants

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homes,

also

they

has

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built new free houses for people who are poor and can’t pay

a good houses

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for them.

However

,

government

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and large

companies

are the

once

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who responsible for their country and

and

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it is development. In

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, the full responsibility is on

government

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and large

companies

because they own

this

environment

as well.

For instance

,one of the main important

point

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is providing schools for inhabitants to be sure that everyone has got the right

of

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education.

In

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other

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hand,

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and large

companies

are able to improve our

environment

because they have got sufficient money despite

individuals

. To make it clear,large

companies

gain significant profits every year as

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has the money too ,except

individuals

they’ve only got their salaries which

is

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less than

government

own .

Finally

,we could say that inhabitants are

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part

from

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this

country. So ,

government

and large

companies

must ensure that steps are taken to prevent

this

phenomenon from deteriorating

further

.