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the diagrams below show the riverpark area of 20 years ago and the riverpark area now

the diagrams below show the riverpark area of 20 years ago and the riverpark area now
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These
two
 maps illustrate a design of a twenty-year- ago central library and its present form.
Overall
,
two
 tables with several chairs have been removed.
Besides
, a lecture room and a café have been added. The entrance is to the south in the middle of the wall and special areas for computes and adult
fiction
books
 exist in both plans. There was a place for CDs, digital games, and videos to the
north-west
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 of the public library twenty years ago. In the south-west, a room was set for daily reading of newspapers and magazines.
Fiction
books
 for adults were placed between these
two
 parts. Over
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a twenty-year-period
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twenty-year-period,
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 these places were replaced by three variously themed rooms. The first part is both for children's
fiction
books
 and storytelling events. It includes
two
 sofas. The whole reference
books
locate
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nearby
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 it. The
last
 area is for the use of computers. Tables were taken away with chairs,
while
 the
the
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entrance did not change its position. In the
north- east
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 different
books
 for children were used to keep.
However
,
this
 part is a lecture place at the moment. Non-
fiction
 materials for grown-ups are not
bythat
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by that
that
 area at present,
instead
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this
 territory has been arranged for
fiction
 materials.
Moreover
, there is an information desk and self-service machines.
Finally
, a café replaced the room with an enquiry desk which used to serve to sell tickets and give
the
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books
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words two, fiction, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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