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The given maps represent Grange Park in 1920 and the same park today. Overall, many facilities were constructed, except entrance place everything had changed gradually.

The given maps represent Grange Park in 1920 and the same park today. Overall, many facilities were constructed, except entrance place everything had changed gradually.
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The pictorial representation illustrates the Grange
Park
un
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 1920 and the changes done at present. All in all, many new facilities are constructed and some of them are
postioned
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positioned
 at
different
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a different
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place
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places
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. Only
entrance
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the entrance
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 doors
an
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and
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 one of the Rose gardens is still
at
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 the old place. It is evident from the map that the big fountain in the centre of the
park
 has been replaced by a Rose garden which has seating
arrangement
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arrangements
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 around it .
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to
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, the stage for musicians is upgraded into an amphitheatre.
However
, the Rose garden located in the north of the stage is still there but the one in the east of the northern entrance is reconstructed into a cafe.
Furthermore
, the pond for
water
 plants has been rebuilt as a large
water
 creature and is shifted
on
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 the place of the
1920's
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1920s
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 glass house.
Inspite
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In spite
 of
water
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the water
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 pond now there is a playground for children .
Moreover
, an underground car
park
 has
also
 been built which has its way through
east
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the east
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 side of the
park
 near
water
creature
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creatures
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.
On the contrary
,
Aldon
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the Aldon
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street
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Street
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 entrance is untouched.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park, water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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