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Nowadays an increasing number of people change their careers during their work life period. What are the reasons behind this trend? Is it a generally positive or negative development?

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Having a successful career is very crucial for survival in
this
 competitive world. The trend of changing
job
 professions is becoming popular among
people
. High
compeition
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competition
 in
job
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 market and high income are some of the causes.
This
 essay will discuss how changing
career
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careers
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 is advantageous for society. To start with, high
compeition
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competition
 for one
job
 profession makes
people
to
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find
new
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a new
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 field. As several
people
 learn one profession
due to
 the high demand at that particular period resulting in lesser
postion
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position
portion
 but more candidates and all
this
 leads to unemployment.
For example
, in the
last
decade
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 the demand
of
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 computer
engineer
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engineers
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 was at
peak
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its peak
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, but now many of them are jobless.
Moreover
, changing to
new
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job
 can be promising for high income. If an individual change his/ her
job
 as per the demand
then
 there is
high
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a high
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 chance that the salary will be way
more high
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 than the
expecations
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expectations
 he or she has. The appeal of Data
analyst
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analysts
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for example
 is rising
everyday
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 and
an
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avergae
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average
 salary a fresher analyst is getting is between half a thousand dollars. Switching
profession
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professions
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 will put a positive impact on the economy of a nation.
This
 is simply
beacuse
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because
, the
people
 will going to have their past experience and learning a new skill will make them more right candidates with high income, by that they can improve their living standard and all these factors will contribute
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country's healthy economy. In conclusion, numerous candidate for one
job
 and to earn more money switching
job
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jobs
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 provides a wonderful alternative for a worker. With
good
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a good
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paycheck
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,paycheck
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 a person can spend more which
all
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apply
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will help to increase the economy of a country.
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