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the graph below show the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

the graph below show the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
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The graph
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demonstrates
 the number of closed
shops
 and openings in the period from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, it can be seen that the total
amount
 of
shops
 for both closures and opened decreased in 2018. Simultaneously, the number of
shops
 which closures fluorated between 2011 and 2018,
similarly
 the
amount
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number
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 of
shops
 which opened
also
 changed gradually in the duration of 2011 to 2018. In 2011, the number of
shops
 which closed
were
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 above 6400 and it dropped to 6000 the next year
then
 it increased to over 7000 in 2013.
In addition
, it decreased to 6500;
conversely
, it dramatically decreased to 800 in 2015 yet it raised to above 5000 after all.
On the other hand
, the
amount
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number
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 of
shops
 which opened was 8500;
however
, it gradually dropped to 4000 in 2012 and it continued increasing to just over 6000 in 2014.
Therefore
, it dropped to 4000 in 2015 and it kept at a similar
amount
 within 2 years in 2017
then
 it dropped to 3000 in 2018.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words shops, amount with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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