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Newspapers have influence on people’s ideas and opinions. What are the reasons? Is it negative or positive development?

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It is admittedly true that the
newspaper
 plays a vital role in
people
's thought
process
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 and helps to make a decision. In my opinion, it has pros and cons as the
newspaper
 does provide us with daily basis public awareness. In
this
 essay, I am going to examine
this
 question from my point of view and give relevant examples. On the one hand,the
newspaper
 is a way of passing information about what is happening in the world in recent times,which can be used as a guide to take preventive actions needed.
For instance
, all relevant information provided is getting published daily in the
newspaper
 in covid-19 time to
people
 how they should awareness of covid-19.
Furthermore
, the
newspaper
also
 provides health information about covid how individuals prevent it and if they attack by covid
then
 what should they do
.
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 These can be some of the many benefits of reading newspapers.
On the other hand
, some
newspaper
 publishers promote unnecessary
news
 which attracts
people
 but it is only done for grabbing the reader's attention. For a successful example,recently a Bangladeshi
newspaper
 publisher The Prothom Alo who have published
news
 about the famous actor arifin nessu’s affair, which is attractive
news
 for arifin neesu’s fanbase but the
news
 was totally misinformation(from Arifen Neesu Facebook post). The
newspaper
 publisher can promote positive
news
such
 as health, law,environment so on.
To sum up
, the
newspaper
 plays an essential role in
people
's life for their
news
 but sometimes they promote negative
news
 which affect
people
's livelihoods.
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