The bar chart compares female unemployment rates in the four countries of the UK in 2013 and 2014.
The chart shows the rates for
unemployment
among women
in the UK during 2013
-2014 years period.
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the 2013
Overall
trend for Add an article
The overall
unemployment
is pleasing for three countries
among four
considered. They are England, Wales, Scotland and Correct article usage
the four
Nothern
Ireland. The Correct your spelling
Northern
rate
is decreasing for
0.3-1% Change preposition
by
except
Scotland, which has the opposite situation of Add the preposition
except for
0.6
% increase.
If we compare four Correct article usage
a 0.6
countries
of the UK, Nothern Ireland has the lowest level of jobless women
. It is
4.6% in 2014, which shows that the percentage Wrong verb form
was
rate
of women
who found a job in comparison with 2013 is higher for
1%. Almost the same level of female joblessness is in Wales Change preposition
at
for
5.4%, and it Change preposition
at
is going
down in 2014 to 5.0%. It is a pretty good index, because Wrong verb form
went
in contrast
, Scotland
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Scotland's
women
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women's
unemployment
rate
is
6.7% in 2014, Wrong verb form
was
it
is higher than Correct pronoun usage
which
previous
year Add an article
the previous
for
0.6%. Fewer number of jobless females reported in 2014 compared with 2015 in England. Change preposition
at
Also
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Also,
the
Remove the article
apply
this
country fixed the maximum ratio of 6.8% in 2013 among all countries
researched.
In general, the rate
of woman
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women
unemployment
in the UK countries
kept
at an acceptable level with slight Verb problem
remained
difference
passing from year to year.Fix the agreement mistake
differences
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