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The pie charts below show the number of native speakers of different languages in Canada in 1996,2006 and 2016. Summatise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

The pie charts below show the number of native speakers of different languages in Canada in 1996,2006 and 2016. Summatise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
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The given pie charts indicate information about various
languages
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 as
English
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,French and non-official spoken by the local people in the year og 1996 to 2016.
Overall
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, most people
into
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to
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talk in
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 and few people used other
languages
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, In the year 2006, three-fifths of citizens used as
the
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speech of
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english
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while
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 French and non-official
languages
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 were about 23% and 17%. After a decade, the
English
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 trend teardown by 2
percent
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per cent
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 but in
this
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 case
of
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apply
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French netizens liked to speak by 20% and non-official
languages
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 range by 1%.
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, in the year 2016, just above the fifth proportion of native speakers communicated in French and non-official
language
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languages
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whereas
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,
English
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 was preferred by native tongue speakers by about 57%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words languages, english with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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