the pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive.The table shows these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

the pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive.The table shows these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
The pie chart gives information about the three main causes of worldwide
land
degradation
, and the table illustrates the shares of three regions (North
America
, Europe, and Oceania) in
land
degradation
during the 1990s.
Overall
,
it is clear that
over-grazing was a key factor for
land
degradation
in the globe, followed by deforestation.
In addition
, Europe had the biggest proportion of total
land
degradation
,
while
North
America
had the lowest
share
. Over-grazing accounted for the biggest
share
with approximately one-third of all
share
for
land
degradation
, followed by deforestation with 30%.
In addition
,
over-cultivation
stood third rank with 28%, and 7% remaining allocated to other causes of worldwide
land
degradation
. Europe ranked first in total
degradation
with 23%,
while
North
America
stood
last
.
Although
deforestation was the most important factor for
land
degradation
with 9.8%, the roles of
over-cultivation
and over-grazing with 7.7% and 5.5% respectively, should not be ignored. In Oceania, over-grazing with 11.3% was responsible for the biggest
share
of
land
degradation
,
whereas
the figure for
over-cultivation
was zero. In North
America
,
However
,
over-cultivation
was the significant factor for
land
degradation
was 3.3%, over-grazing had almost the half of
share
of
over-cultivation
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Agricultural productivity
  • Deforestation
  • Over-cultivation
  • Overgrazing
  • Soil erosion
  • Nutrient depletion
  • Land degradation
  • Soil compaction
  • Fertility
  • Preventive measures
  • Sustainable farming practices
  • Environmental impact
  • Economic implications
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