The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Cafe by season. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart illustrates the
number
of servings of selected food items
sold in
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on
the
average daily at the Brisk Cafe in two seasons.
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Overall
, hot items
such
as hot coffee
and soup were the best selling
in the winter, Add a hyphen
best-selling
whereas
cold items
such
as Iced coffee
and Iced cream were the signature items
in the summer
. Moreover
, Salad stayed at the same average daily sales in both
two seasons.
In the winter, the proportion of hot coffee
reached a peak of the chart, with over 70 units
on average sold every day
. in
addition, Soup Capitalize word
In
also
showed a significant number
when this
item was bought 50 units
per day
. However
, both
hot items
were a downward trend in summer
, There were just 30 units
and below 30 units
, with the hot coffee
and the soup, respectively.
On the other hand
, Iced coffee
became the best selling in the summer
which the
Correct article usage
a
number
of servings was
40 Unnecessary verb
apply
units
. This
was the same happen, as when Iced cream increased in number
, with nearly 40 units
on average sold every day
. Meanwhile, both
Iced items
dropped in the winter, especially Iced coffee
was the lowest selling, with nearly 0 unit was
purchased in a Unnecessary verb
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day
, and the Iced cream went down slightly, with above a bit 20 units
, sold lower than in summer
10 units
per day
. In addition
, the number
of salad was
served in Unnecessary verb
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both
seasons showed the same proportion, with higher than 20 units
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, items, coffee, summer, both, units, day with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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