The maps below show recent changes in town of Kimsvile. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps show the main changes which have taken place

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town of Kimsville between the year 2002 and today In general, it appears that Kimsville has become a much more modern city, with far more transport facilities and leisure equipment One of the main change is that

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at the bottom left side of the

map

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been replaced by

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a football

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stadium modern . The trees above

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cut down and converted into new apartments. Today, a new train station has been built between the two buildings.

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, the old cinema has been turned into

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pub without change in appearance

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near by

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has been knocked down and constructed a

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software company

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there are many places

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has

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remained during that period. The city centre at the

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of the

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has been unchanged in size.

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, the green zone

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the right of the

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has been kept

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20 years and the shopping centre between two

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the top of the

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still has been conserved

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today

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

181 words

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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The maps below show recent changes in town of Kimsvile. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The crime nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance in technology which can help prevent and solve crime.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

According to observations, some animal species have become extinct or endangered in recent decades. What are reasons behind this tendency? What effects it may have on ecosystem in general?

QUESTIONS: In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decided to do this.