An increasingly number of professionals , such as doctors and teachers , are leaving their own poorer countries yo work in developed countries . What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with  this situation ?

Nowadays,  many

professionals

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as doctors or teachers prefer to live in developing

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so they leave their own home and country . In my ,opinion

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largely

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because of  inexpensive payment  and  lack of modern work devices and the best solution lies in increasing employment and salary  for

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and creating a comfortable and well-equipped workplace. One of the principal causes that can lead to moving to modern  places is a

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salary. 

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is large because in poorer

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   less

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  attention to the best

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and they can earn more money in developing

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rather than in their own backward

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.

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uncomfortable workplace is the best reason for

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kind of professional. Today, there are few

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that can afford modern equipment and offices.  Many professional doctors who live and work in developing

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, migrated from their

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of birth in order to earn more money in hospitals equipped with comfortable working equipment. There are  several actions that could be taken to solve the problems described above. 

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a simple solution would be to encourage workers who  master of own jobs with well-paying attention.

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, the best solution to

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problem is for poor

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to try to create workplaces and  offices   like modern

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and to create new jobs.

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, some of the emigrated

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  came back to their own poorer

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because the government built new office buildings  and

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more

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higher

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salaries  .

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way would be profitable for both employees and

country

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the country

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In summary, the root cause of  leaving poorer

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is

less salary

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low salaries

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and unavailable necessary technologies and

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issue keeps giving birth to

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globally as long as well-equipped workplaces and well paying are not taken.