You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently a new neighbour moved in and has been making a lot of noise, which disturbs you. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: explain the situation describe why it bothers you suggest a solution

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Dear Mr Gorge, I hope you and your family are doing well. I am writing

this

letter to bring your attention towards a noise issue that has been created by a new tenant for

last

week. He is residing at my apartment 22

anglers catch lane

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Anglers Catch Lane

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, Brampton in my adjacent room. He has been celebrating certain occasions with his peers who come daily around 10 P.M., and they are used to drinking wine and making deafening commotion for approximately three hours. As I am a full-time worker, I have to wake up early in the morning.

However

, the noise has been disturbing me

while

I sleep.

Therefore

, it makes me unable to get up on time

as a result

I get late for my work. Since you are a landlord

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it would be great if you

can

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make them realise

this

convenience.

Also

, I would really appreciate it if you

may

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request them to celebrate early in the evening or prior to 9 P.M. I hope you

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comprehend it, and I am looking forward to your prompt action. Yours faithfully, Rajwinder Kaur Brar

Submitted by rajwinder85913 on Tue Aug 22 2023

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greeting and closing

Maintain a more formal and respectful tone in addressing the landlord, consider using appropriate salutation such as 'Dear Mr. Gorge' instead of casual phrase 'Hey there'

task response

Ensure the content of the letter aligns with the task prompt, and provide specific suggestions to address the noise issue, such as noise regulations, complaint process, or negotiation of quiet hours.

coherence and cohesion

Organize the content into paragraphs with a clear topic sentence for each, and ensure that there is a smooth and logical progression of ideas throughout the letter.

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

185 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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