Some people think cities are the best place to live. Other prefer to live in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some individuals consider

cities

as the best place to live

whereas

there are some people who believe the

countryside

is better.

This

essay will discuss both views with a conclusion

at the end

. On the one hand, city life provided a lot of benefits

such

as hospitals,

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better jobs and facilities,

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better of living as compared to life in villages. As

cities

provide better employment opportunities, people are paid higher which improves their living standard and becomes easy for them to fulfil all their desires.

For instance

, one of my friends who went to London

last

year for his work has now bought his own car and house.

Moreover

, most of the prestigious educational institutions and industries are located in

cities

which compels attracts a lot of students.

However

, there is another opinion that living in the

countryside

is more comfortable. The main reason

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seem

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advice

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are

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the quiet and peaceful place. There are many species of plants, so the atmosphere and food are always clean and fresh. We can enjoy a fresh

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without worrying about environmental pollution. There is

also

no water pollution.

Moreover

, living in the

countryside

is cheaper than in the city, so you can buy more rubber at a lower price. The other positive side is safety, crimes rates are much lower.

To conclude

, the place where they live

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on how they feel.

Cities

and the

countryside

are giving both advantages and drawbacks.