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many working people get little or no excercise either during the working day or in thier free time, and have health problems as result. Why do many working people not get enough excercise? what can do done about this problem?

#people #excercise #thier #time #health
Nowadays
people
 were running
beind
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behind
 their regular routine
work
 to earn money, most of them humans health become very worst because of their hectic
work
 pressure to overcome that men and
womens
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women
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 can follow some small exercises in their daily
freetime
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free time
 or even in the
time
 of wakeup at
early
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 morning. but
inspite
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in spite
 of lack of
time
 availability we are failing to follow that, here let us discuss in detail about the
exercise
 of
people
 need to do in the regular working
day
.
Mordern
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Modern
 days, the corporate
work
peoples
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people
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 sitting
infront
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in front
 of the computer
whole
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the whole
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day
 even
people
 used to eat 3 times a
day
 often but now
ones
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once
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 a
day
 in excited, the main reason that working
people
 not getting enough
exercise
because
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 of lack of sleep young boys and girls were working in night shifts continuously
this
 leads to lack of eye problem and brain damage meanwhile it leads to death very earliest.
for
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 IT
employees
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wprk
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work
time
 needs to be reduced from morning 9 to evening maximum
7
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pm.
people
 if they come at 9pm and more than the same they used to have
complete
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 tired and stressed
will
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and will
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 be going
straiaway
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straightaway
 to bed for sleep,
atleast
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at least
 we need 7 hours of sleep for a
day
.
Furthermore
 as discussed from the
begining
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beginning
,
people
 have to be
health
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healthy
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and concentration
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concentration
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 more and doing
exercise
 is very good for our body that keeps
away
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us away
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 from any other diseases, the solution
of
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 the problem is that I would suggest
people
 can frame a timetable for a
day
 on their routine
work
 in the specific chart they used to allot a separate
time
 for
exercise
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for example
 sleeping is
very
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a very
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 good form of
exercise
, sitting in
chair
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a chair
the chair
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 in the office and
streching
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stretching
 on hand and legs is a type of small exercises.
Finall
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Finally
 by concluding money is
also
 important for
human
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humans
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 meanwhile to earn money,
people
 should take care of their health, so far that
people
 can follow some little
excercises
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exercises
exercise
 and
yoga
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do yoga
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 regularly without fail and be happy,
healthy
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and healthy
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 always.
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