The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries
The graph shows how the number of drinks used worldwide. Between 1900 and 200. The agriculture sector was the largest section that uses water at the beginning of
this
period was 500 km
but after ,that it significantly increased which achieved 3000 km
in 2000. When it comes, to water used in the industrial and the domestic section, the graph shows From 1990 to 1980 it remained steady which was around o km
but in 1960 the industrial port exceeded that of the domestic it accounted for 1000 km
while
the domestic arrived at 300 km
.
The table gives information on differences in agriculture consumption in Brazil
and Congo
, irrigated land in Brazil
was by far the most used drink compare with Congo
, It was 26500 in Brazil
while
the figure was 100 km
in Cong also
there are a lot of people live in Brazil
(176 miles)but in Congo
consisted 8.2 million, as in consequence everyone in Brazil
which consumption of water in Brazil
should be more than in Congo
(382 m For Brazil
and 8 m is Congo
)Submitted by nc.rafeeha on
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