You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. Introduce yourself Explain what sort of job you would like Say what experience and skills you have

Dear Sir/Madam, I am Anjali Mathur, currently pursuing a Master's in Business Administration. I am writing

this

letter to apply for a part-time job in order to fulfil my term fees. I am a university-going student having Accounts as my major subject, I want to apply for jobs that give me an opportunity to use my accountancy skills and knowledge to the best capacity.

In addition

to that, I had 1 year of experience in Tally Accounting software.

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I worked as a cashier for 6 months at Cosco.

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, I am excellent

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maintaining records and journal entries

as well as

profit and loss accounts for the organization. I am willing to work 3 days a week with flexible timings.

Furthermore

, I would like to join at the earliest and work wholeheartedly. Hoping for a positive reply from an organization that suits my needs

as well as

their requirements. Thank you, Yours sincerely, Rahul Mishra

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I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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7 paragraphs

158 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. Introduce yourself Explain what sort of job you would like Say what experience and skills you have

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people believe that in order for a hobby to be enjoyable, it needs to be difficult in some way. Do you agree or disagree?

Creative artists should always be given freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree on this IELTS topic?

Write a letter to a friend who is looking for a part time job. Describe a job you have found for him/her including: - What are the duties? - Why do you think it is a good job for him/her? - What does he/she have to do to get it?

in some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness are decreasing. what whould you think the causes, and what measures could be taken to solve them

Light pollution (excessive light during night time) is a form of pollution that distresses many people, especially in modern cities. What are the causes of light pollution, and what solutions can you suggest for governments and businesses to take?