Some people think cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in the countryside. Discuss boths view and give your opinion.
Many argue that being in the downtown area is a good place to live. Meanwhiles, some people choose to have life in urban
areas
. It seems to me that a large town is a liveable
place than the others.
Correct quantifier usage
more liveable
To begin
with, the main advantage of living in the city
is there are better job opportunities, most international companies have offices in the big city
. Moreover
, jobs in cities
are more diverse. For example
, in the countryside, it often requires labour work and the income is very low. Furthermore
, cities
provide more high-quality education
compared to rural areas
. Hence
, people who live in the city
can give their offspring better education
. A recent study that was conducted in The UK showed that almost 65% of schools in rural areas
lack component teachers and leaving materials. This
needed evidence that education
is better in the big cities
. And last
but not least, public transportation is more developed in the urban areas
there are buses, subway, light rail and much more.
However
, there are some drawbacks that come with living in the cities
. First and foremost, urban areas
are facing a range of serious environmental issues such
as air pollution, and water and soil contamination. Moreover
, the high cost of living compared to surrounding rural areas
. Living expenses such
as rant daily groceries tend to be higher in larger cities
. Furthermore
, usually moving from the countryside to the city
include downsizing. Most of the apartments in the big cities
are much smaller and also
it is very difficult to find an outside space like a yard or a patio.
In conclusion, living in cities
have its own merits and demerits but in my opinion
having access to better Add a comma
,opinion
education
and better job opportunities outweigh the cons of living in the cities
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