Do you believe that experimentation on animals for scientific purposes is justified. Are there any alternatives to animal experiments?

Some people debate that all experimentation on
animals
is not good and
also
needs to be punished,
while
others think that important scientific discoveries could be made from animal tests. The testing
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animals
can be justified and cannot pursue
this
activity in the law courts, personally, I believe that all
of
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scientific research needs subjects to examine and it can be done by using
animals
.
However
, I would to discuss my main reasons and some possible examples in
this
essay. On the one hand, there is a group of people that gives
objection
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to how scientists
use
animals
as their research objects.
This
kind of activity that scientists did was from a long time ago to discovering new medical technology. It is inevitable that they tend to
use
animals
as an object than
humans
.
For example
, the developer of medicine products namely vaccine or antidote usually tests their product on
animals
than
humans
. There is a higher risk and extremely dangerous to
humans
as objects of research, it can be caused death
for
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humans
. Rather than using
humans
as an object, it is better and beneficial to
use
animals
.
Furthermore
, using certain
animals
such
as
mouse
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, and rabbit are not
dangererous
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dangerous
to their population. They have a short circle of life from baby to mature animal. That condition can be used for scientific purposes to make a new discovery.
For instance
, The laboratory worker likely used rats to test their drugs to get know how venomous some medicine
.
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minute the test and
then
make advance observations
the
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products that could be commercial or not.
To sum up
, based on my opinion, the
use
of
animals
experiment cannot be judged
due to
some purpose and
its
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benefits for us
by
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using certain
animals
.
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