These days it is much easier for many people to travel to different countries for tourism than in the past. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Contemporary

Add an article

The contemporary

show examples

world provides humans

a

Add the preposition

with a

show examples

great

amount

Change the quantifier

number

show examples

of possibilities for

journey

Correct article usage

a journey

show examples

and

this

does not require several incredible

effort

Change to a plural noun

efforts

show examples

as it was in the past.As

such

,going on vacation individuals have a varied choice of attractions and countries ,which they can visit.

However

, sufficiently open and easy access for a

traveler

Change the spelling

traveller

show examples

to inspect certain states for tourism has its drawbacks ,

number

Correct article usage

a number

show examples

of which

are

Change the verb form

is

show examples

equal to the advantages and do not outweigh them. On the one hand ,available tourism opportunities provide people chance to observe other cultures customs,lifestyles and new technologies .

Thus

, humans can adopt some things from foreigners and enrich their own culture or improve their lives. To illustrate, in recent years ,many have been striving to visit developed Asian regions

as

Correct quantifier usage

such as

show examples

Singapore,Hong Kong,Japan in order to plunge into

environment

Correct article usage

an environment

show examples

, where much is automated and observe the latest development in action for

then

implement them in their homeland.

On the other hand

, easy access to

trip

Fix the agreement mistake

trips

show examples

means huge flows of tourists in popular places and ,

consequently

,the life of locals there can be seriously disturbed by constant crowds ,noise

polution

Correct your spelling

pollution

,

traffic

Correct word choice

and traffic

show examples

jams.

Moreover

,a large

number

of visitors may adversely affect the environment,

the

Correct word choice

and the

show examples

preservation of historical sites and cause ecological

problem

Fix the agreement mistake

problems

show examples

.

For example

, a large

number

of travels are carried out with the help of aircraft, of which there

are

Change the verb form

is

show examples

a huge

number

per day. Flights, in turn, have a negative impact on the atmosphere, since during them a large amount of carbon dioxide and other harmful substances are emitted.

Suchwise

Correct your spelling

Such wise

,if it was difficult for people to travel,

then

they would use planes less often.

To conclude

,despite the fact that nowadays tourism is affordable enough for everyone ,it allows people to expand their horizons of the mind and in general it is a spectacular activity ,it has certain negative consequences.

This

does not mean the individuals should stop having access to

journey

Correct article usage

the journey

show examples

,though ,both the authorities and citizens need to be approached responsibly to it.