Some people think that we should replace old buildings and houses in cities with more modern buildings. Other people think we should protect old buildings. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is indisputable that these days many countries are looking forward
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improving their layout of infrastructure and roads. Indeed, some people believe that old
buildings
should be replaced with modern style ones.
While
others argued that we should protect these ancient
buildings
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since it is a part of our cultural identity. In
this
essay,I will shed light on these two arguments and draw my own personal perspective. A large number of
buildings
nowdays
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are affected by
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and
tears
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phenomenon.
In other words
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the reparing
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reparing
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repairing
preparing
and
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maintenance
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do not have
noticable
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noticeable
changes
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these
buildings
.
Consequently
, some of these
buildings
may collapse and causes
determental
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detrimental
effect on residents.
Besides
, enormous countries nowadays are having
a dramatical improvements
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in their cities,
for instance
destroying traditional areas and establishing new residential areas in order to gain an international reputation among other countries. On the other end of the scale, these old
buildings
reflect our traditional roots
as well as
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identity that we ought to preserve and protect from any damage. For illustration, some places
such
as Santorini city which is located in Greece,
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are proud of their ancient architecture
buildings
as a result
, it is considered one of the ultimate gateway destinations in the world.
Moreover
, having these styles of
buildings
can be attractive for plenty of tourists around the world, merely as Egypt which has a bundle of old-fashioned properties that gravitate many tourists in the meantime.
As a result
,
this
will enhance their economic income. In conclusion, after analyzing different
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of
views
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, I strongly advocate the importance of ancient constructions and recommend that governments ought
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ensure steps are taken to prevent our national
identifiy
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identity
identify
from being
distroyed
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destroyed
or ruined.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • paramount
  • evolutionary journey
  • tangible link
  • fostering
  • sense of belonging
  • architectural beauty
  • economic benefit
  • tourist attractions
  • preservation techniques
  • structural integrity
  • energy-efficient
  • sustainable architecture
  • cultural preservation
  • urban demands
  • contemporary lifestyles
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