Some people think that we should replace old buildings and houses in cities with more modern buildings. Other people think we should protect old buildings. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is indisputable that these days many countries are looking forward

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improving their layout of infrastructure and roads. Indeed, some people believe that old

buildings

should be replaced with modern style ones.

While

others argued that we should protect these ancient

buildings

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since it is a part of our cultural identity. In

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essay,I will shed light on these two arguments and draw my own personal perspective. A large number of

buildings

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are affected by

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and

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phenomenon.

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reparing

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repairing

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and

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maintenance

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do not have

noticable

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changes

on

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these

buildings

.

Consequently

, some of these

buildings

may collapse and causes

determental

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detrimental

effect on residents.

Besides

, enormous countries nowadays are having

a dramatical improvements

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in their cities,

for instance

destroying traditional areas and establishing new residential areas in order to gain an international reputation among other countries. On the other end of the scale, these old

buildings

reflect our traditional roots

as well as

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identity that we ought to preserve and protect from any damage. For illustration, some places

such

as Santorini city which is located in Greece,

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are proud of their ancient architecture

buildings

as a result

, it is considered one of the ultimate gateway destinations in the world.

Moreover

, having these styles of

buildings

can be attractive for plenty of tourists around the world, merely as Egypt which has a bundle of old-fashioned properties that gravitate many tourists in the meantime.

As a result

,

this

will enhance their economic income. In conclusion, after analyzing different

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of

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, I strongly advocate the importance of ancient constructions and recommend that governments ought

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ensure steps are taken to prevent our national

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identity

identify

from being

distroyed

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destroyed

or ruined.