Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

Recently, some people
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using
animals
for experimentation is essential for science.
However
, it is debatable by others who opines that it is bad for the wildlife and should be outlawed as they believe that there are other
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to
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scientific discoveries.
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essay will focus on alternative ways to help
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animal preservation and justification
on
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animal experiments.
To begin
with, preventing the animal from
the
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scientific discoveries is something undeniable these days.
However
, the technology advancement has
allow
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the scientist to use other tools to conduct an experiment.
For example
,
instead
of using
animals
as part of the
reseach
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research
, they can use artificial
inteligent
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intelligence
like
hologram
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of a creature to find what they want.
Moreover
, they
also
can use virtual
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when
do
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their experiment so they will not harm any species in
this
world.
On the other hand
, animal experiments
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something that should be banned nowadays
due to
animal preservation.
This
act has been enormously
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a lot of species for scientific purposes.
For instance
, the research on vaccine
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Covid-19
desease
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disease
has
kill
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hundreds of pigs and monkeys as both mentioned
animals
have similar DNA to
human
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humans
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.
This
action should be brought to the international court as it has
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big amount of
those creature
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. All in all,
although
having
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a
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scientific research on
animals
is still important, it
need
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to be stopped as it is really dangerous for the future of our wildlife
existance
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existence
and it needs to be
pu
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put
on
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international law for better preservation of the
animals
.
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Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • scientific breakthroughs
  • ethical concerns
  • alternatives
  • animal testing
  • moral implications
  • ethical considerations
  • vivisection
  • research methods
  • ethical dilemmas
  • animal welfare
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