A council is closing a childrens playground because it is not being used often by children. Write a letter to the Council Mayor. In your letter explain
Dear Mayor
sir
,
I am writing regarding Capitalize word
Sir
letter
to you.Many years ago Add an article
a letter
the letter
people
used to come with their children and had lots of fun in playground
. Nowadays Add an article
the playground
people
are not coming in
Change preposition
to
this
playground
. There are many games to play, but people
dont
want to see it there Correct your spelling
don't
people
don't like where the playground
was located. nowadays people
are not coming in
Change preposition
to
this
playground
We have waited long
time that Change the article
a long
people
will visit playground
and make Add an article
the playground
used
. But the Change the form of the verb
use
playground
is being
very unused, so we cannot Unnecessary verb
apply
waste land
like Correct your spelling
wasteland
this
nowadays playground
is getting really dirty and Correct article usage
the playground
grass
Correct article usage
the grass
are
getting Change the verb form
is
more
longer so that snakes are coming Change the word
apply
at
Change preposition
to
playground
.There are houses near Add an article
the playground
a playground
playground
. It will be harmful for them so we are closing Add an article
the playground
a playground
children's
Correct article usage
the children's
playground
.
We are waiting for your reply.
kinds regards
MaryChange the verb form
regard
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.