A council is closing a childrens playground because it is not being used often by children. Write a letter to the Council Mayor. In your letter explain

Dear Mayor
sir
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, I am writing regarding
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a letter
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to you.Many years ago
people
used to come with their children and had lots of fun in
playground
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the playground
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. Nowadays
people
are not coming
in
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to
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this
playground
. There are many games to play, but
people
dont
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don't
want to see it there
people
don't like where the
playground
was located. nowadays
people
are not coming
in
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this
playground
We have waited
long
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a long
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time that
people
will visit
playground
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the playground
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and make
used
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use
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. But the
playground
is
being
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very unused, so we cannot
waste land
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wasteland
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like
this
nowadays
playground
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the playground
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is getting really dirty and
grass
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the grass
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are
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is
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getting
more
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apply
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longer so that snakes are coming
at
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to
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playground
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the playground
a playground
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.There are houses near
playground
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the playground
a playground
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. It will be harmful for them so we are closing
children's
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the children's
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playground
. We are waiting for your reply. kinds
regards
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Mary
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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