The map illustrates the between and predicted future Islip town centre.

The map illustrates the between and predicted future Islip town centre.
The diagrams below illustrate how the
centre
of Islip town is planned for development.
It is clear that
there are a lot of noticeable changes
such
as, the main
road
ring has been built and
also
, several facilities buildings have been constructed. in the Islip town
centre
now, we can see that, the main
road
through runs from east to west. In the second map, pedestrianisation will be constructed.
Also
controlling traffic, a dual carriageway will be planned around the city
centre
for controlling traffic . Currently, there are several row
shops
along either the main
road
.
However
, in the north of the
,
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pedestrian the
shops
will be converted into the shopping
centre
.
Also
, some facilities
such
as a bus station, car park and new housing will be constructed.In the south of the main ,
road
shops
will remain but in the south of the
shops
, the town’s park will be reduced and new housing along the side of the
road
will be built.
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