Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
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A part of the population believes that conducting any experiment on
animals
needs to be criminalised by authorities, while
, another group argues that experimentation
on animals
is fundamental to achieve
tangible scientific progress. In my opinion, doing Wrong verb form
achieving
experiments
on animals
dor
medical reason is acceptable and necessary, because we Correct your spelling
for
dont
have Correct your spelling
don't
alternative
method with Add an article
an alternative
same
accuracy and efficiency, Correct article usage
the same
however
, exposing animals
to cruel and dangerous experimentation
to examine cosmetic effects is not logical and need to be illegal by law.
Admittedly, experimentation
on the
animal is very essential for science and Correct article usage
apply
medicin
, Correct your spelling
medicine
due to
the fact that the
animal physiology and Correct article usage
apply
their
Correct pronoun usage
apply
cells
structure is very close to Change the noun form
cell
the
Correct determiner usage
that
Change preposition
of humans'
humans'
ones and that what Change noun form
humans
make
using Change the verb form
makes
animals
as experiments
subjects resulting accurate result that benefit all health Replace the word
experimental
researches
. Correct your spelling
researchers
In contrast
, conducting an experimentation
on an animal to produce Replace the word
experiment
a better beauty products
is not reasonable under any circumstances. Correct the article-noun agreement
better beauty products
a better beauty product
Moreover
, numerous animals
lose their lives in laboratories when under-developing products'
quality Change noun form
products
experiments
are done on them, which is a very inhuman
action Correct your spelling
inhumane
needs
to be banned. Correct pronoun usage
that needs
For instance
, more than 60000 rabbits died in China in 2018 under cosmatics'
Correct your spelling
cosmetics
cosmetic
experimentation
procedures.
we can not replace animals
as subjects for scientific experimentation
yet because the similarity between their organs and ours makes them the perfect experiments
subject, Fix the agreement mistake
experiment
however
, scients
tried to conduct Correct your spelling
scientists
experiments
on human tissues without achieving accurate results due to
the fact that a whole living animal reflects better results than a part of human when doing experimentation
, however
, there is a project in France to create functional
way to do scientific Add an article
a functional
experimentation
without the need for animals
and the hopes are high.
in conclusion, animal experiments
are justified and necessary for scientific research and medical purposes, and for the moment, we don't have effective alternatives, but experimentation
on animals
to produce cosmetics needs to be outlawed.Submitted by bousaadhazim on
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