Some people think that the best way to become successful in life is to get a university education, whereas others say this is no longer true. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion .

In

this

contemporary era, having more

education

increases the chances of getting highly-paid jobs. Some people think that

education

has become an essential part

to lead

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a successful career,

while

others claim if we acquire a

skill

or talent, it can

also

help us to become eminent in our

life

.

This

essay will discuss both sides of the argument and give my opinion. On the one hand, Supporters of university

education

believe that if a person is post-graduate,

then

his or her demand in the market will increase more than other individuals. Because nowadays,

due to

the

job

,recession people are having a hard time finding even a simple labour

job

.

For instance

, Having a degree in hand can boost the reliability of hiring as employers can prefer a candidate with a higher

education

over a high school grad student.

Additionally

, It is a belief that people who are doctors and engineers have a more successful career than other professions.

Therefore

, an individual requires the highest level of

education

to enter into those professions. On the other side, those who do not give importance to a university degree opine that having the

skill

to do something is a must regardless of their qualification. To exemplify, There have been many cases in

this

world where most businessmen did not even enter a school or college.

For example

, Even though my father has not passed

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college, he is a well-known diamond entrepreneur owing to the fact that he possesses a great deal of experience and

skill

to be active in his industry. His experience and

skill

have given him significant knowledge which he can not gain from studying a book. In my opinion,

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certification is a necessary requirement for professionals

such

as doctors or engineers.

However

, there are other fields of the area where

education

is the least required namely merchant, painting or singing.

Hence

, to become successful in a career one has to decide which

skill

they obtain or what degree they want to get admission into. If they follow the path of their capability and interest they can have

prosperous

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life

. In conclusion, Higher

education

aids in achieving a desired

job

and being a competitor in the

job

market,

while

having expertise

also

assist

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in living a contentful

life

. In the end, It is up to us to choose the right path and work hard to live our dream

life

.