The map belows shows the industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned futrure development of the site.
The pictorial chart illustrates the present industrial area in
town
of Norbiton and its proposed future developmental plan.
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the town
Overall
, the present factories will be eliminated and housing buildings will be constructed with some other new facilities such
as playground
for children, Add an article
a playground
school
, Correct article usage
a school
shopping
centre and a medical centre.
As it is evident from the map that the industrial area has several factories around the circular road and the farmland is beside the river which is in the north direction of the manufacturing companies. As per Correct article usage
a shopping
planned
plot, all the industries will be wiped out and Add an article
the planned
housing
colony will be constructed in that area.
Correct article usage
a housing
Further
, the circular road will be extended in
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to
west
and north Correct article usage
the west
along with
a bridge on the river which will lead to a residential building across the river. Moreover
, other necessary facilities will also
be provided which will include hospital
, Correct article usage
a hospital
school
, a shopping centre Correct article usage
a school
as well as
a playground for children.Submitted by shavidhillain on
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