The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.
The bar chart compares consumer spending on
six
different items in Germany, Italy, France and Britain. Use synonyms
It is clear that
British Linking Words
people
spent significantly more money than Use synonyms
people
in the other three countries on all Use synonyms
six
goods. Of the Use synonyms
six
items, consumers spent the most money on photographic film. Use synonyms
People
in Britain spent just over £170,000 on photographic film, which is the highest figure shown on the chart. Use synonyms
By contrast
, Germans were the lowest Linking Words
overall
spenders, with roughly the same figures (just under £150,000) for each of the Linking Words
six
products. The figures for spending on toys were the same in both France and Italy, at nearly £160,000. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
while
French Linking Words
people
spent more than Italians on photographic film and CDs, Italians paid Use synonyms
out
more for personal stereos, tennis racquets and perfumes. The amount spent by French Change preposition
apply
people
on tennis racquets, around £145,000, is the lowest figure shown on the chart.Use synonyms
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