The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries
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The tables illustrate the number of
sales
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in
million
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euros
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of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in five European countries in two years, 1999 and 2004.
Overall
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, the first and second place in usage of both coffee and bananas is for
UK
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and
Switzerland
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in 1999 and 2004
while
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Sweden almost has the least consumption of both in those years.
Switzerland
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sold 3
million
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euros
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of Fairtrade-labelled of coffee in 1999 which was two times more than the
UK
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.
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,
UK
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sales
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were slightly 3 times more than
Switzerland
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in 2004. The
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of Denmark and Sweden remained steady and changed to only 0.2
million
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euros
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but 70%
sales
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increasing recorded for Denmark, from 1 to 1.7 MM
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. The amount of
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for bananas was 15
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euros
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for
Switzerland
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in 1999 which increases to 47
million
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euros
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.
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, the most rate of growth belonged to the
UK
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which is 5.5 multiplying, from 1 to 5.5 MM
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. The only country that decreased, was Denmark with approximately becoming half from 2 to 0.9
million
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euros
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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