Some people argue that governments should not pay money for the international aids when there are some disadvantaged people in their own country, such as the homeless and the unemployed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today, many

people

frequently switch their

jobs

or professions every few years. In my opinion, there are some disadvantages

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situation, but

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I believe there are more advantages and I will elaborate in

this

essay. On the one hand, often changing their

jobs

has some disadvantages. When

people

quit their job so fast, they do not build up careers and owners of companies think that folks do not have patience which affect their image.

For example

, Korean society has serious conservatism so they do not like that kind of

people

. If temporary workers quit their

jobs

easily and find other cooperation, they will not get a job easily because the company's sharing applicant’s information.

As a result

,

people

's life becomes worse, and will not earn money.

On the other hand

, the frequent switch has some advantages.

First,

a person who has a child, that person cannot work longer maybe need a part-time job.

Second,

the present community trend has changed. Many young generations do not want to work hard like their parents generations.

Third,

plenty of

people

do not know what they really want and it is hard to find. But, If they change

jobs

often, someday they will find what they want to do. Eventually,

this

situation is good not only for employers but

also

for employees because it can reduce unnecessary expenses and is good for our societies. In conclusion, often changing their

jobs

is a double-edged sword. It is not good for building a career but it will help to find what they want. So, it depends on individual preference which one is better.